The transport is very important in our daily life. We can't live without the transport, such as the MRT, cars, trains, and so on. Although the transport is important, it's still have some problems should be improved. I think the most important problem is that the transport isn't convenient in the east of Taiwan. And the second problem is that we should reduce the accident rate of the train. The third problem is that trains are not as clean as the high-speed rail, I think Taiwan Railway Administration should be attention on this problem. There are still has some problems of the transport in Taiwan, in order to improve our transport, we have to be attention on them.
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2. Although the transport is important, it's still have some problems should be improved. => Although...it still has some problems...